I saw love
Like a firefly
Moving swiftly through the wilderness
I was enchanted by its beauty
For I had never seen something
So pure so beautiful
In my entire life
I was engulfed by a strong desire
I wanted to hold it
Gently in my plams
Look at it lovingly
Nourish it with my love and care
I was so blinded by its beauty
That I didn’t notice the path of thorns
Under my feet
I didn’t think for a moment
I started walking on those thorns
And I was bleeding
With pain that shattered my heart into a million pieces
But strangely
After a while
I didn’t feel it
For my heart was full with nothing but love
And compassion and kindness
Slowly I was transformed
Into a more beautiful person
Inside out
When I reached the other end
And found love
I held it close to my heart and said
“I could walk through the thorny path over and over if it leads me to you”
© Vrunda Chauk
Whoa! My dear, your poem draws such imagery of love. And love, all kinds – romantic, familial, friendship, and most importantly humanity, makes life beautiful❤️
It makes the world spin. 🌎🤗
Amazing poem❣️
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Awwww🥺❤️
Teri thank you soooo much! I’m so glad you liked it💗❤️
I do feel all kinds of love change us in a beautiful way and make us a better person and all the hardships are worth it for the people we love❤️❤️❤️❤️
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You’re so sweet and share such good vibes ❤️
So young to be so wise. You are a precious soul❣️❣️❤️❤️🤗🤗
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Thank you Teri!!! Your encouragement and kind words really mean a lot! ❤️❤️❤️
You are a beautiful soul who encourages and uplifts others like me! You’re sunshine in human form💛✨
Keep shining 💖
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Aw, that’s the sweetest thing I’ve ever heard❣️ I’m so grateful finding like-minded people on WP seeking, sharing and spreading love and positivity. You are definitely one of them and so very young to be so in tune with yourself and the kind of person you wish to be 😍❤️
Keep on being wonderful you❤️🤗
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Beautiful poetry!
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Thank you so much!! ❤️
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My pleasure!
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Reblogged this on B +Ve !!.
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Thank you for sharing ❤️❤️❤️
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Pleasure to share such a great poem! 🙏🏻
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Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️
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Thank you!! ❤️❤️❤️
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My pleasure 🤗🤗❤️
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💛💛💛
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Last night I was thinking of the prince who had to brave the tangle of thorny bushes and briars to get to his princess.. then I read your poem. This is so true..<3
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Woah! 💫
Thank you so much for reading! ❤️💛
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Such beautiful Poetry! Nice to meet you here! Visit sometime. 🙏 Cindy
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Thank you so much for your kind words! Really appreciate it❤️❤️❤️🙏
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You are most welcome!!! ❤️
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Smiles At Best
Love is The
Journey
Thorns
Flower
Rose
RiSinG
CoLoRinG
Paths
More…
Sadden
Not What
Wilts
Promise
Winter
Springs
Breathing
In Stems
Roses
Yet Told
Seeing Love
Being This Breath🍃😁
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That’s so true! ❤️❤️❤️
I love the nature imageries you use! 😍
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Thanks Vrunda
Your Poem
Very Inspiring ☺️
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Thank you so much! Means a lot! 🥺❤️
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🙌💫☺️
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💛💛💛
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😊
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Waao Vrunda!!! U hv captured the true essence of love so beautifully …♥️
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Thank youuu soo much Lavanya! ❤️❤️❤️❤️ It’s wonderful to hear from you💗🙏
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Beautiful soul
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❤️❤️❤️
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you so much! ❤️❤️
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Beautifully penned 🥰👏👏👌👌👌
Loved it 🥰😍
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A person should consider oneself lucky if walking on the path full of thorn is worth it. If the person standing at the other end of the path doesn’t deserve it then the entire effort goes in vain and you end up feeling no love and only pain.
#MyWordsKraft
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That’s true
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