She needed love
She saw glimpses of it in him
She gave him all she got
He hurt her and left
She spent the rest of her life thinking there’s something wrong with her
How could you blame it, my child?
Your need of love,
Your need of belonging
Your need of emotional connection?
©Vrunda Chauk
Just amazing…”She” could be replaced with “He” . “Him” with “Her” and still your poem will convey the same message! very beautifully written…
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Yes! It can be interchanged. It’s more about learning to acknowledge our needs of love and belonging. And knowing it’s okay to need love
Glad you liked it!! 😊
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Yes. Thank you. Your words flow in a nice sequence!
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Honestly, I’ve never tried poetry before… I don’t even know if what I write is real poetry… I just want get my message out there.. so I do just focus on it being easy to understand..
Glad you like it!❤️😊
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There is no rules to express one’s thoughts..as I said it’s the flow and proper sequence that matters…
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Yes.. agree!
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😍
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Thanks!😊
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Everyone out there deserves to be loved back. Period. If one is not getting their share of love, they should know that they are with wrong person and should detach from the feelings. Leaving some person is easy than getting detached from the feelings for that person. However making one of the choices is necessary. Well written Vrunda! 👍
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Umm… I think love is about choice… Like wether or not someone chooses to love you.. it’s not about deserving love.. like everyone is free to choose whom to love.. it’s good if other person chooses you as well but not necessary you ‘deserve’ their love just because you love them… maybe they choose to choose someone else.. And yes, we all need love and we shouldn’t feel bad for searching it..❤️
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I consider that a one side love which eventually lead to pain. One should stay away from that kind of love. Yes, love happens unknowingly but at some stage everything becomes clear and that’s the time to rethink. I really don’t know if we are on the same page. 😅
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I appreciate you sharing your thoughts.. even though we aren’t on same page.. it’s good hearing from you!😊
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I love it, the flow of emotions.. it’s heart wrenching
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Glad you could feel its depth, Ramyani! I’ve never tried this style actually..
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Your every writing feels relatable somewhere..don’t know whether I should be happy or sad about it..but there is a glimpse of truth and rawness in your writing..I love that💞
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I like to express my truth.. I guess that brings that raw feel in my writings…
Sooo glad you like it Lavanya!!😊 Thank you for your kind words!! ❤️
P.S – I like your name.. means beautiful right?
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Yeah it does..😆
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Thanks for accepting and following my blog.
I’m available to read your post at my convenient time.
You have such an interesting topic I will love to read in
your blog.
I still remain the simple blogger…..
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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Oh am touch by this post. this blew me away. Thank you for taking the time to share these write up through these words.
These words are painted in truth, experience and perspective. I especially love how you started it and how you ended the write up. Beautifully written and as I read through again on each line I was amazed . Each word you used are true and reflective of my personal encounter with people .
This produced a smile on my tired face after a long day. You’re appreciated.
You are welcome
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace ✌and Love ❤
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Awww… Thank you so much Patrick! I deeply appreciate your kind words!🙏 Means a lot to me. It was so wonderful reading your comment. You just made my day!!😊 Thank you so much!
Hope you have a fabulous week ahead!❤️
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Sadness.. simple words used yet depicted ur thoughts deeply Vrunda..
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Thank you so much Chiru!! Glad you liked it!😊❤
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Nicee
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Thank youu!!
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